Even though I'm on the fanfiction for stories, I'll show a preview chapter for new ones.
Here's my new series and the continuation of Galactic Heroes: Avatar Heroes.
I couldn’t figure out how to type the first chapter so I’ll explain it right here:
Twilight Turbine and his sister Fate plus their friends join their family for an adventure. But when their parents and grandparents aren’t any match for this new threat, so the Divine Vessel Elements and the Galactic Vessel Avatars go into the Grandchildren to turn them into the Evolved Vessels giving a new power. It’s revealed that Eraticalamitus who had returned a decade ago, but his power was crushed and unable to be restored and he’s now stuck as a kid is behind the attack. But it’s been revealed that his dark spores have all landed together meaning he has an entire army at his disposal. Twilight fights one of his armies with the newly evolved Geminos and destroys it. Erati says it’s only begun. Now Ametrine has given them all new weapons and given them their own guild and they’re heading there now.
“Can’t this rust bucket move any faster?†Chimney complained for the eighth time today. “Shut up, Chimney!†Fushichou yelled and punched Chimney across the face. Chimney growled in anger and jumping on Fushichou, starting their usual daily brawl. Twilight sighed and shook his head at the two cousins and their constant fighting. “Everyone is getting restless. How much longer until we reach our destination?†Twilight asked Ametrine. “It shouldn’t be too long now.†Ametrine replied. “Attention all passengers, we are have arrived at our destination and are now beginning our descent.†The pilot announced over the loudspeaker. “Perfect timing.†Twilight commented. “It’s about time.†Chimney said before receiving a fist in his jaw. The heroes quickly to their places as the G.U.N. aircraft descended down into a small clearing in the middle of an unknown forest. Upon landing, Chimney was the first to jump out and started running aimlessly around the area. “WOO-HOO! Finally!†Chimney cheered. “Does he ever stop?†Lightning asked. “Not for as long as I’ve known him.†Candy said. “So where is this Guild you were talking about?†Melody asked Ametrine. Chimney was enjoying his returned freedom until he suddenly ran into a secret Guild concealed in the trees. “Found it!†Chimney’s muffled voice called. The other heroes sweat dropped.
“All right, everybody, this is it. Welcome to your new guild.†Ametrine said as slowly opened the Guild door. Everyone, with the exception of Twilight, stood waiting in excitement at what they would find inside. Unfortunately, their excitement was turned to major disappointment once the doors were fully opened. As the heroes walked inside, they found that thing were not as they hoped. Inside of fabulous luxury Guild of operations, they found a dim-lit, depressing, sewer guild. On top of its bad lighting and depressing atmosphere, several floor tiles were missing, a few support beams were missing, and a few rats also lived here. “What the hell is this?†Melody cursed. “You can’t really be serious.†Lightning said before stepping in a puddle of strangely colored slime. “EWW!†everyone said in disgust. “You are going to have your soldiers fix this, right?†Twilight asked. But when he asked, the aircraft suddenly took off with Ametrine on board. But not before dropping a ton of hardware supplies in front of them. “That cheapskate!†Steel screamed at the top of his lungs. “He really expects us to fix this whole place by ourselves?†Fate asked. “It would seem so. You guys go ahead and fix this place up. I’m going to have a little ‘chat’ with Ametrine.†Twilight said before chasing after the aircraft. “Well, guess we ought to get to work.†Chilly said before stepping in another puddle of slime. “EWW!â€
Kirika started his work by setting up the foundation for the Guild. It was actually quite amazing that the whole place didn’t fall down on them the second they stepped in. Kirika placed a steel girder on the wall and melded it in place. Kirika turned to pick up another one. But just as she was about to grab another girder, the previous one suddenly fell over. Kirika looked confused for a moment, but thought nothing of it and placed the girder back. She was about to reach for another one when the same girder fell again. Kirika put the girder back into the wall. Kirika slowly turned around to pick up another girder. The previous one slowly starts to fall until Kirika swiftly turns around. Almost instantly, the girder stands back up and falls back into place. Kirika felt proud of herself for her minor accomplishment. Well, that is until the girder fell. Out of anger, Kirika fired her flames in random areas of the Guild. Once she calmed down, she felt a slight tap on her shoulder and turned around. Kirika then came face-to-face with Fushichou, Steel, and Glow; all covered in burn marks.
“Ok, the foundation of the place is finally sturdy, no thanks to Kirika.†Diamond said as she glared at the Lava Vessel. Diamond then pulled out a large Blueprint from out of nowhere and opened it up to show to everyone else. “Ok, me and sweet tooth came up with an idea of what the place will look like when we’re done. Since the foundation is done, we should get to work on reinforcing the roof.†Diamond said. “Got it!†Everyone shouted. Candy then picked up a small steel beam and Glow grabs a larger piece. When Candy and Glow turned to stare working, Candy piece knocks Diamond off her feet and Glow’s piece hits her in the face. The two hits flip Diamond off the ground and cause her to land on her butt. “Diamond, what are you doing down there?†Glow asked. “Oh, nothing. I just like lying on the floor on my beak.†Diamond said sarcastically. “That’s not very healthy.†Glow said, not realizing Diamond’s sarcasm. Diamond jumped back to her feet at stared at the two with flames of anger in her eyes. “Uh, guys...run.†Lightning advised. Glow failed to understand what Lightning meant and was suddenly whacked in the face by Diamond’s foot.
Glow and Candy landed on the roof to make the necessary repairs. Meanwhile, Kaede was looking over at the blueprint when Melody came in all excited. “Hey, look what I found.†Melody said. And from out of nowhere, Melody pulled out a fine furnished table and placed it in between the two. “At least that cheapskate Ametrine left us something useful.†Melody said. “Hey, Glow, look at this! What kind of idiot would use newspaper to patch a roof?†Candy yelled from the roof. All of a sudden, Candy fell through the newspaper roof and landed on the new table, crushing it on impact. “Candy!†Kaede and Melody yelled at the sweet tooth. “Hey, little buddy, where’d you go?†Glow cried. Next thing they knew, Glow fell through the roof as well and landed directly on Candy. “Whoa! Awesome!†Glow cheered. “Uh...Glow.†Melody said to catch his attention. “Hey, girls. Have you seen Candy?†Glow asked. Kaede and Melody pointed down and Glow followed the direction of their fingers to see Candy on his butt. “Hey, Candy. What are you doing?†Glow asked. Kaede and Melody sweat dropped.
Down in the Guildment, Zelkova, Chilly and, Lightning were left with fixing the electrical problems with the Guild. “Ok...what do we do now?†Chilly asked. According to Candy, we are supposed to connect the blue wire with the yellow wire to properly align the electricity throughout the Guild.†Zelkova said. “That doesn’t sound too hard.†Lightning said as he opened the fuse box. Unfortunately, the second he opened the box, they were piled on by an avalanche of blue and yellow wires. “You were saying.†Chilly complained. “Look, it shouldn’t be too hard. All we have to do is figure which is which.†Zelkova said. “Then why don’t you do it, genius.†Lightning mocked. “All right, I will.†Zelkova said. Zelkova started diving under the pile of wires in search of which wire he was supposed to be looking for. “He’s been in there way too long. I have to save him. If I don’t make it back, tell my mom I, love her. And tell Thunder, stay away from my stuff.†Lightning said before diving under. “Hey, don’t leave me here alone!†Chilly cried as he too dived under. Zelkova had no idea where he was or how long he had been in this electric mess. ‘This taking too long. Might as well get this over with.’ Zelkova thought as he pulled out his scythe. Zelkova slowly pressed the scythe to a random wire and prayed to god he got it right. Back upstairs, Zelkova, Lightning, and Chilly’s painful sLights echoed through the Guild as the lights returned to normal.
Fortune was unfortunately stuck with janitor duty and was forced to clean the strange, unnatural slime on the floor. But Fortune wasn’t complaining. Fortune just sat back and relax and used her psychokinetic powers to clean the mess for her. Just then, Fate came in with a giddy look in her eyes. “Hey, what’s with you?†Fortune asked curiously. “This place is so amazing. I mean sure it has some problems, but that’s nothing we can’t fix. And that’s not even the best part.†Fate said. “What?†Fortune asked. “There are only nine rooms.†Fate said happily, much to Fortune’s confusion. “So?†Fortune asked. “So...that means we all have roommates.†Fate said. “Who’s roommates?†Chimney asked as he walked in. “Chimney, don’t you want to be my roommate?†Fate asked cutely. “Uh, no thanks. Hey Fortune, what do you say we bunk together?†Chimney asked. “I say...I’m gonna go hide under the table.†Fortune said. “We don’t have a table.†Chimney said. Fortune used her psychokinetic powers to repair the broken table and said “we do now.†Before diving under it. Chimney looked confused for a moment.
Dark was left in charge of catch the renegade mice that wander around the Guild. Dark had a natural ability at catching mice. Dark had disposed of all the mice, except for one. “Get back here!†Dark yelled at the runaway mice as they began a game of cat and mouse. The mouse somehow pulled a banana peel and left it for Dark to slip on. Dark slid on the peel and crash straight into the wall. The mouse gave a small chuckle. “The little sucker’s laughing at me.†Dark said. Dark dived at the mouse, only to have it slip through his fingers and run into its hole. “Gotcha now.†Dark said as he reached into the hole. The next second, a small snap was heard and Dark yelped in pain. Dark pulled out his hand and found a mouse trap attached to it. “Damn rodent.†Dark cursed. Dark’s highly sensitive ear heard a noise from above and looked up to see the air vent opening. The mouse showed its head from the vent and Dark blasted the mouse with his negative power.
The Guild was mostly finished, but thing between the heroes were getting rough. Light and Steel were in charge of painting the Guild and the two were arguing which color to use. “I say green!†Steel exclaimed. “No! Orange is better!†Light exclaimed. “Green!†“Orange!†the two continued to argue until Fushichou came up to them and said “Hey guys. “What!†Steel and Light screamed as they turned to him, accidentally covering him in paint. “What the?†Fushichou questioned. Fushichou now looked like some sort of tan, green, and orange monster. And Izumi thought so too. “Monster!†Izumi yelled as she swung around to hit him. “Izumi! Wait!†Fushichou tried to talk sense to her, but it was all in vain. “AAH!†Fushichou screamed in pain. Steel and Light stared at the mess they caused for a moment before slowly scurrying away. Fushichou finally grabbed a hold of his broadsword and stared at Light and Steel with angry eyes. “Steel! Light!†Fushichou yelled furiously. “Steel and Light gave an audible gulp.
“Damn Ametrine. Who does he think he is, leaving us with this mess?†Twilight complained as he returned to the Guild. But the moment he returned, he heard, what sounded to be, a fight coming from inside. “What the?†Twilight questioned as the opened the Guild doors. He was greeted by the sight of a nearly completed Guild and all of his friends arguing about something. “Ok, enough!†Twilight yelled at the top of his lungs. Everyone stop immediately and looked in the direction of Twilight. “Ok, what is going on?†Twilight asked. The next thing he knew, Twilight as barraged by the oncoming complaints. “QUIET!†Twilight yelled. Everyone was silent. “Listen, I know most of us don’t get along very well. Some more than others. But the fact is, we’re friends. We help each other in times of trouble. And if we can’t work together for something as simple as this, then there is no hope for this team.†Twilight said. Everyone took a moment to rethink what Twilight said and figured that he was right. “He’s right, we’re all friends. As long as we are together, there is nothing that can stop us.†Fortune said. “Now, let’s get to work.†Twilight said. Everyone cheered and resumed their previous duties.
With the power of teamwork, everyone had finally completed their jobs and were celebrating their success in their new kitchen. It was amazing how big their Guild was. it surprisingly not only had bedrooms, but it also had a training room, a giant laboratory and a hanger with a workshop. And the matter of roommates was settled shortly after by Twilight. Twilight was bunking with Chimney, Fortune with Candy, Kaede with Fushichou, Fate with Melody, Dark with Light, Lightning with Glow, Zelkova with Chilly, Steel with Izumi, and Diamond had her own room while Kirika rested in the workshop. “A toast to our new team and our new lives.†Twilight said as he raised his glass to his friends. “Cheers!†everyone shouted. “And speaking of team, me and others came to a decision.†Chimney said. “What decision?†Twilight asked. “Well, after the way you led us through the day and your Cubia’s son, we have decided to make you leader of this team.†Fortune said. “Really?†Twilight asked in shock. “Really.†Chimney confirmed. “Thanks guys. With this new team, nothing can bring us down.†Twilight said.
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