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Title: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on May 15, 2010, 07:39:40 AM
Hi there all you lot! There are so many fanfics to read back at the section, I don't know where to start! Here's a topic for giving a summary on what you've written or would like to pen, and please post what your story's called so I can read it =)
My own story is called 'Sonic and the Msytery of Chaos', and is the first of what will be six books (six being a motif you'll see plenty of), and three prologues that I have not thought of a name for now, but will narrate Sonic's childhood days with the Freedom Fighter (my Freedom Fighters, the the ones from the Archie Comics) and it's all my own SonicVerse.  I've been writing SatMoC for nearly year now, and it's a fun hobby to take my mind of TEE and other stresses.

*SA Tails: I wish SMF had merge post function in addition to merge topic. >.>*

Hehe, that being *Mystery* of Chaos.


Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Zonic Mirage on May 16, 2010, 12:07:28 PM
Please don't double post. If you find a typo, go back and edit it by clicking Modify, or the little icon on the bottom right of your post that looks like a pencil and a notepad. Posts have been merged in the meantime. Thanks for your cooperation. ¦D
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on July 16, 2010, 07:52:27 AM
Is there anybody out theeeeeere?? Post! Feel welcome! Tell me what stories to read already! There are too many for my lazy brain to browse through!
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Gale Fox on July 16, 2010, 02:34:34 PM
Angels, read it. It's my first attempt at a non universally-specific story.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on July 16, 2010, 11:54:14 PM
Interesting, you've got that weird style of writing events as they happen - I primarily write in 3rd person (semi-omnsiscient). Don't you think it might be easier if you spaced out the paragraphs a bit differently? For example:

“Good god, are you ever going to get over me?” Compendium cuts Yuki off, slightly lifting his head from the book he was completely immersed within. “Why should I?” Shiro pauses for a second and sniffles as her eyes begin to tear up.

“Good god, are you ever going to get over me?” Compendium cuts Yuki off, slightly lifting his head from the book he was completely immersed within.
“Why should I?” Shiro pauses for a second and sniffles as her eyes begin to tear up.

Sorry if I've got the wrong person speaking, but hopefully you get my drift, and do you see the confusion it causes if it's all bundled together?
In other news, the concepts there are fascinating! Is it all a fanfic, or your own ideas? (I've never actually heard of any of it)

Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on July 17, 2010, 01:08:31 AM
I write Elemental Heroes Neo, its a remake of my original Elemental Heroes series that I deleted half a year ago because I made so many characters it became a mess. Its a story about the next generation of Sonic and friends including some extras.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on July 17, 2010, 02:40:34 AM
Wow, this is embarrassing...
SVT Number 1 fan, I'm having trouble finding 'Elemental Heroes Neo'. You see, I searched series, and there's nothing in the 'E' section, and so then I searched titles, and with the same result. Help?
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on July 17, 2010, 11:45:44 AM
That's because the series is here on the forum, not the fanfiction section.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Gale Fox on July 17, 2010, 06:21:04 PM
Quote from: Tailsthehedgehog on July 16, 2010, 11:54:14 PM
Interesting, you've got that weird style of writing events as they happen - I primarily write in 3rd person (semi-omnsiscient). Don't you think it might be easier if you spaced out the paragraphs a bit differently? For example:

“Good god, are you ever going to get over me?” Compendium cuts Yuki off, slightly lifting his head from the book he was completely immersed within. “Why should I?” Shiro pauses for a second and sniffles as her eyes begin to tear up.

“Good god, are you ever going to get over me?” Compendium cuts Yuki off, slightly lifting his head from the book he was completely immersed within.
“Why should I?” Shiro pauses for a second and sniffles as her eyes begin to tear up.

Sorry if I've got the wrong person speaking, but hopefully you get my drift, and do you see the confusion it causes if it's all bundled together?
In other news, the concepts there are fascinating! Is it all a fanfic, or your own ideas? (I've never actually heard of any of it)



Ah; I do have an unorthodox writing style: Really, I switch between enter-spacing and paragraph formatting on random, but the former of which for action scenes.

And yeah, SVT, get your butt back to the FF section! And as for the character thing, I only focus on characters to the point whereas I'm absolutely obsessed with them at that time frame. Speaking of which, I absolutely love Xenophobia ^^ It (sorry Xeno~) has to be the most neutral (literally) character I have.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on July 18, 2010, 03:18:04 AM
Quote from: Gale Fox on July 17, 2010, 06:21:04 PM
Ah; I do have an unorthodox writing style: Really, I switch between enter-spacing and paragraph formatting on random, but the former of which for action scenes.

And yeah, SVT, get your butt back to the FF section! And as for the character thing, I only focus on characters to the point whereas I'm absolutely obsessed with them at that time frame. Speaking of which, I absolutely love Xenophobia ^^ It (sorry Xeno~) has to be the most neutral (literally) character I have.

You named a character after the fear of other races?
Oh well, I once named a character after my wireless router ;) 'Welkin' - though his story is indefinitely in my desk drawer.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on July 18, 2010, 12:36:28 PM
I would go back there, but the Fanfiction section was my past which I have decided to move on from. I'm in this section to start over as the new SVT number 1 fan. (Now if I could only change my pen name.)
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Gale Fox on July 18, 2010, 07:35:25 PM
Well, we could all badger SA Tails to change your name to your new penname.

Right, forums?
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: grox on July 18, 2010, 08:08:58 PM
I second that motion.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on July 18, 2010, 08:50:08 PM
Well first I need to pick a new pen name. So any ideas?
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Gale Fox on July 18, 2010, 10:15:59 PM
Why not er... Do something in Latin or another language?
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on July 19, 2010, 01:56:13 AM
How about 'Terios', which was Shadow's code name? That's got some hidden reference to the Sonicverse. Just, pick something out the air =) I just stuck the two main characters together to get my name.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on July 19, 2010, 01:55:21 PM
Well when I pick a pen name I like to use something that represents me, when I choose this penname I did it because I was a great fan of this site.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Gale Fox on July 19, 2010, 02:48:41 PM
Ah, kinda like my name is Gale Fox (Quezzie), the last word of which was my nickname for a large portion of my childhood by my parents.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on July 19, 2010, 07:03:55 PM
I just got an idea for a name, if I'm not allowed to get my penname changed, I'll just let people know I'd rather be called Avatar Geminos (Which is one of the deities I'll have in my next series.)
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on August 04, 2010, 08:23:40 AM
So... who wants to recommend me a fanfic to read?
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on August 04, 2010, 11:17:03 AM
I'm about to post a continuation from Elemental Heroes NEO, Its called Galactic Heroes, I'm about to post the first three chapters. Check it out.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on August 04, 2010, 07:19:04 PM
That is pretty cool, but don't you think you might want to post it in the fanfiction zone? And maybe expand it a little - Cubia seems to take rather easily to being an Avatar/Chaos Spark thing (see? It's all going a bit too fast for the reader, maybe you could insert some exposition for Cubia's world?)
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on August 04, 2010, 10:44:41 PM
Well it's true that I was on the fanfiction section once, but if you read another post of mine. I said that it was my past which I want to walk away from. I post my stories on the forum as my new path. So basically what I'm saying is that there were to many sorrowfull memories in the fanfiction zone for me, such as many great authors leaving. Plus my account disappeared and my sister is using the last availible e-mail adress.

As for Cubia, he isn't that much phased at having an Avatar because his parents and grandparents had powers that made them legends in Gaia's history. He figured it was a matter of time before he would write history.

And lastly, what's exposition?
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on August 05, 2010, 06:49:26 AM
Exposition is just a fancy word for explanation - people like me use it in a want to sound smart  ;). Plonk a reader in an unknown fantasy world, and they need to know who is who in terms of authority, and where they are, or even how or why the characters behave like they do. Even if Cubia's heritage was explained in the previous series, Elemental Heroes NEO, a reader may not have read EHN. And in Galactic Heroes, if there was some exposition, it must have been very brief. This is a short example:
E.g Sonic was a young, brash, hedgehog on he planet Mobius, a world much like our own. X years ago, Robotnik's forces invaded from Central Country, and now oppress nearly two-thirds of the globe, ripping apart Sonic's life as he knew it and thrusting him into a whole new one.
It's like your basic who, when, what, why, how kinda thing.

I think you should consider going back to the fanfiction zone - sorrowful memories make us feel cold and small inside, but what doesn't kill us makes us stronger, and it is important to learn from those memories. You've got some strong material - perhaps consider expanding on it? With SVT slowly but steadily coming back to life, you could be one person to help nurture the site, filling the fanfiction zone with life once more (phoenix metaphor, anyone?). As for old writers leaving, well, there is some new talent trickling in - just look at me! ;)
PS: Feel free to ignore all I say 8) I'm only a girl with a love for the art of penmanship - not (yet) an author!
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on August 05, 2010, 12:48:24 PM
Well as I said in my last post my sister used the remaining e-mail adress, so even if I wanted to return to the fanfiction section I can't unless I can get my parents to consider to make another e-mail adress.

But you know since my sister had a second account that was deleted I think maybe I might be able to head back. I guess that's the best place for me to be reborn.

I guess I didn't think about explaining what had happened before because I didn't want to really give spoilers, but maybe I can work around that.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on August 05, 2010, 01:58:46 PM
I've decided, I'm returning to the fanfiction section! My penname will be Avatar Geminos.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on August 05, 2010, 07:07:15 PM
I'm wishing you good luck  :D
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on August 05, 2010, 09:44:12 PM
Thank you.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on August 13, 2010, 08:13:53 AM
Gah (panic!), Geminos - Kelsey is married with kids at 19!?
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on August 13, 2010, 12:05:59 PM
I should mention that in my series one of the things the advanced technology did was stop the aging process at 19 years. So most people are nineteen years old but since some have been around longer than that they are referred in age as 19+ (meaning its been a year since they stopped aging)
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on August 15, 2010, 02:39:18 PM
Even though I'm on the fanfiction for stories, I'll show a preview chapter for new ones.

Here's my new series and the continuation of Galactic Heroes: Avatar Heroes.

I couldn’t figure out how to type the first chapter so I’ll explain it right here:

Twilight Turbine and his sister Fate plus their friends join their family for an adventure. But when their parents and grandparents aren’t any match for this new threat, so the Divine Vessel Elements and the Galactic Vessel Avatars go into the Grandchildren to turn them into the Evolved Vessels giving a new power. It’s revealed that Eraticalamitus who had returned a decade ago, but his power was crushed and unable to be restored and he’s now stuck as a kid is behind the attack. But it’s been revealed that his dark spores have all landed together meaning he has an entire army at his disposal. Twilight fights one of his armies with the newly evolved Geminos and destroys it. Erati says it’s only begun. Now Ametrine has given them all new weapons and given them their own guild and they’re heading there now.



“Can’t this rust bucket move any faster?” Chimney complained for the eighth time today. “Shut up, Chimney!” Fushichou yelled and punched Chimney across the face. Chimney growled in anger and jumping on Fushichou, starting their usual daily brawl. Twilight sighed and shook his head at the two cousins and their constant fighting. “Everyone is getting restless. How much longer until we reach our destination?” Twilight asked Ametrine. “It shouldn’t be too long now.” Ametrine replied. “Attention all passengers, we are have arrived at our destination and are now beginning our descent.” The pilot announced over the loudspeaker. “Perfect timing.” Twilight commented. “It’s about time.” Chimney said before receiving a fist in his jaw. The heroes quickly to their places as the G.U.N. aircraft descended down into a small clearing in the middle of an unknown forest. Upon landing, Chimney was the first to jump out and started running aimlessly around the area. “WOO-HOO! Finally!” Chimney cheered. “Does he ever stop?” Lightning asked. “Not for as long as I’ve known him.” Candy said. “So where is this Guild you were talking about?” Melody asked Ametrine. Chimney was enjoying his returned freedom until he suddenly ran into a secret Guild concealed in the trees. “Found it!” Chimney’s muffled voice called. The other heroes sweat dropped.

“All right, everybody, this is it. Welcome to your new guild.” Ametrine said as slowly opened the Guild door. Everyone, with the exception of Twilight, stood waiting in excitement at what they would find inside. Unfortunately, their excitement was turned to major disappointment once the doors were fully opened. As the heroes walked inside, they found that thing were not as they hoped. Inside of fabulous luxury Guild of operations, they found a dim-lit, depressing, sewer guild. On top of its bad lighting and depressing atmosphere, several floor tiles were missing, a few support beams were missing, and a few rats also lived here. “What the hell is this?” Melody cursed. “You can’t really be serious.” Lightning said before stepping in a puddle of strangely colored slime. “EWW!” everyone said in disgust. “You are going to have your soldiers fix this, right?” Twilight asked. But when he asked, the aircraft suddenly took off with Ametrine on board. But not before dropping a ton of hardware supplies in front of them. “That cheapskate!” Steel screamed at the top of his lungs. “He really expects us to fix this whole place by ourselves?” Fate asked. “It would seem so. You guys go ahead and fix this place up. I’m going to have a little ‘chat’ with Ametrine.” Twilight said before chasing after the aircraft. “Well, guess we ought to get to work.” Chilly said before stepping in another puddle of slime. “EWW!”

Kirika started his work by setting up the foundation for the Guild. It was actually quite amazing that the whole place didn’t fall down on them the second they stepped in. Kirika placed a steel girder on the wall and melded it in place. Kirika turned to pick up another one. But just as she was about to grab another girder, the previous one suddenly fell over. Kirika looked confused for a moment, but thought nothing of it and placed the girder back. She was about to reach for another one when the same girder fell again. Kirika put the girder back into the wall. Kirika slowly turned around to pick up another girder. The previous one slowly starts to fall until Kirika swiftly turns around. Almost instantly, the girder stands back up and falls back into place. Kirika felt proud of herself for her minor accomplishment. Well, that is until the girder fell. Out of anger, Kirika fired her flames in random areas of the Guild. Once she calmed down, she felt a slight tap on her shoulder and turned around. Kirika then came face-to-face with Fushichou, Steel, and Glow; all covered in burn marks.

“Ok, the foundation of the place is finally sturdy, no thanks to Kirika.” Diamond said as she glared at the Lava Vessel. Diamond then pulled out a large Blueprint from out of nowhere and opened it up to show to everyone else. “Ok, me and sweet tooth came up with an idea of what the place will look like when we’re done. Since the foundation is done, we should get to work on reinforcing the roof.” Diamond said. “Got it!” Everyone shouted. Candy then picked up a small steel beam and Glow grabs a larger piece. When Candy and Glow turned to stare working, Candy piece knocks Diamond off her feet and Glow’s piece hits her in the face. The two hits flip Diamond off the ground and cause her to land on her butt. “Diamond, what are you doing down there?” Glow asked. “Oh, nothing. I just like lying on the floor on my beak.” Diamond said sarcastically. “That’s not very healthy.” Glow said, not realizing Diamond’s sarcasm. Diamond jumped back to her feet at stared at the two with flames of anger in her eyes. “Uh, guys...run.” Lightning advised. Glow failed to understand what Lightning meant and was suddenly whacked in the face by Diamond’s foot.

Glow and Candy landed on the roof to make the necessary repairs. Meanwhile, Kaede was looking over at the blueprint when Melody came in all excited. “Hey, look what I found.” Melody said. And from out of nowhere, Melody pulled out a fine furnished table and placed it in between the two. “At least that cheapskate Ametrine left us something useful.” Melody said. “Hey, Glow, look at this! What kind of idiot would use newspaper to patch a roof?” Candy yelled from the roof. All of a sudden, Candy fell through the newspaper roof and landed on the new table, crushing it on impact. “Candy!” Kaede and Melody yelled at the sweet tooth. “Hey, little buddy, where’d you go?” Glow cried. Next thing they knew, Glow fell through the roof as well and landed directly on Candy. “Whoa! Awesome!” Glow cheered. “Uh...Glow.” Melody said to catch his attention. “Hey, girls. Have you seen Candy?” Glow asked. Kaede and Melody pointed down and Glow followed the direction of their fingers to see Candy on his butt. “Hey, Candy. What are you doing?” Glow asked. Kaede and Melody sweat dropped.

Down in the Guildment, Zelkova, Chilly and, Lightning were left with fixing the electrical problems with the Guild. “Ok...what do we do now?” Chilly asked. According to Candy, we are supposed to connect the blue wire with the yellow wire to properly align the electricity throughout the Guild.” Zelkova said. “That doesn’t sound too hard.” Lightning said as he opened the fuse box. Unfortunately, the second he opened the box, they were piled on by an avalanche of blue and yellow wires. “You were saying.” Chilly complained. “Look, it shouldn’t be too hard. All we have to do is figure which is which.” Zelkova said. “Then why don’t you do it, genius.” Lightning mocked. “All right, I will.” Zelkova said. Zelkova started diving under the pile of wires in search of which wire he was supposed to be looking for. “He’s been in there way too long. I have to save him. If I don’t make it back, tell my mom I, love her. And tell Thunder, stay away from my stuff.” Lightning said before diving under. “Hey, don’t leave me here alone!” Chilly cried as he too dived under. Zelkova had no idea where he was or how long he had been in this electric mess. ‘This taking too long. Might as well get this over with.’ Zelkova thought as he pulled out his scythe. Zelkova slowly pressed the scythe to a random wire and prayed to god he got it right. Back upstairs, Zelkova, Lightning, and Chilly’s painful sLights echoed through the Guild as the lights returned to normal.

Fortune was unfortunately stuck with janitor duty and was forced to clean the strange, unnatural slime on the floor. But Fortune wasn’t complaining. Fortune just sat back and relax and used her psychokinetic powers to clean the mess for her. Just then, Fate came in with a giddy look in her eyes. “Hey, what’s with you?” Fortune asked curiously. “This place is so amazing. I mean sure it has some problems, but that’s nothing we can’t fix. And that’s not even the best part.” Fate said. “What?” Fortune asked. “There are only nine rooms.” Fate said happily, much to Fortune’s confusion. “So?” Fortune asked. “So...that means we all have roommates.” Fate said. “Who’s roommates?” Chimney asked as he walked in. “Chimney, don’t you want to be my roommate?” Fate asked cutely. “Uh, no thanks. Hey Fortune, what do you say we bunk together?” Chimney asked. “I say...I’m gonna go hide under the table.” Fortune said. “We don’t have a table.” Chimney said. Fortune used her psychokinetic powers to repair the broken table and said “we do now.” Before diving under it. Chimney looked confused for a moment.
Dark was left in charge of catch the renegade mice that wander around the Guild. Dark had a natural ability at catching mice. Dark had disposed of all the mice, except for one. “Get back here!” Dark yelled at the runaway mice as they began a game of cat and mouse. The mouse somehow pulled a banana peel and left it for Dark to slip on. Dark slid on the peel and crash straight into the wall. The mouse gave a small chuckle. “The little sucker’s laughing at me.” Dark said. Dark dived at the mouse, only to have it slip through his fingers and run into its hole. “Gotcha now.” Dark said as he reached into the hole. The next second, a small snap was heard and Dark yelped in pain. Dark pulled out his hand and found a mouse trap attached to it. “Damn rodent.” Dark cursed. Dark’s highly sensitive ear heard a noise from above and looked up to see the air vent opening. The mouse showed its head from the vent and Dark blasted the mouse with his negative power.

The Guild was mostly finished, but thing between the heroes were getting rough. Light and Steel were in charge of painting the Guild and the two were arguing which color to use. “I say green!” Steel exclaimed. “No! Orange is better!” Light exclaimed. “Green!” “Orange!” the two continued to argue until Fushichou came up to them and said “Hey guys. “What!” Steel and Light screamed as they turned to him, accidentally covering him in paint. “What the?” Fushichou questioned. Fushichou now looked like some sort of tan, green, and orange monster. And Izumi thought so too. “Monster!” Izumi yelled as she swung around to hit him. “Izumi! Wait!” Fushichou tried to talk sense to her, but it was all in vain. “AAH!” Fushichou screamed in pain. Steel and Light stared at the mess they caused for a moment before slowly scurrying away. Fushichou finally grabbed a hold of his broadsword and stared at Light and Steel with angry eyes. “Steel! Light!” Fushichou yelled furiously. “Steel and Light gave an audible gulp.

“Damn Ametrine. Who does he think he is, leaving us with this mess?” Twilight complained as he returned to the Guild. But the moment he returned, he heard, what sounded to be, a fight coming from inside. “What the?” Twilight questioned as the opened the Guild doors. He was greeted by the sight of a nearly completed Guild and all of his friends arguing about something. “Ok, enough!” Twilight yelled at the top of his lungs. Everyone stop immediately and looked in the direction of Twilight. “Ok, what is going on?” Twilight asked. The next thing he knew, Twilight as barraged by the oncoming complaints. “QUIET!” Twilight yelled. Everyone was silent. “Listen, I know most of us don’t get along very well. Some more than others. But the fact is, we’re friends. We help each other in times of trouble. And if we can’t work together for something as simple as this, then there is no hope for this team.” Twilight said. Everyone took a moment to rethink what Twilight said and figured that he was right. “He’s right, we’re all friends. As long as we are together, there is nothing that can stop us.” Fortune said. “Now, let’s get to work.” Twilight said. Everyone cheered and resumed their previous duties.

With the power of teamwork, everyone had finally completed their jobs and were celebrating their success in their new kitchen. It was amazing how big their Guild was. it surprisingly not only had bedrooms, but it also had a training room, a giant laboratory and a hanger with a workshop. And the matter of roommates was settled shortly after by Twilight. Twilight was bunking with Chimney, Fortune with Candy, Kaede with Fushichou, Fate with Melody, Dark with Light, Lightning with Glow, Zelkova with Chilly, Steel with Izumi, and Diamond had her own room while Kirika rested in the workshop. “A toast to our new team and our new lives.” Twilight said as he raised his glass to his friends. “Cheers!” everyone shouted. “And speaking of team, me and others came to a decision.” Chimney said. “What decision?” Twilight asked. “Well, after the way you led us through the day and your Cubia’s son, we have decided to make you leader of this team.” Fortune said. “Really?” Twilight asked in shock. “Really.” Chimney confirmed. “Thanks guys. With this new team, nothing can bring us down.” Twilight said.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on August 16, 2010, 07:36:53 AM
How long have you been writing that series, Avatar Geminos?
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on August 16, 2010, 12:24:55 PM
The whole series, five months; galactic and avatar heroes, one month; and one-hundred heroes, a week.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on August 16, 2010, 12:46:54 PM
Here's the preview of One-Hundred Heroes

There has been a war, a war against the very foundations of light against the very foundations of darkness. This war has been going on for nearly 100 years. It all started when Eggman released the evil of Omnipotential out of its prison and a boy who was once a hedgehog united with other species to stop him, it manifested years later and a new generation of heroes was lead by a young girl called the United Champions, then the true evil showed its face and was defeated, for then but more villain came and then the divine beings sacrificed themselves to create a barrier that would protect us for nearly 2 decades, but then a dictator race came to enslave the planet and the next generation rose in a very long battle with their Avatars against the Planets and came victorious. The second and third generations united against the return of Erati who was thought to be dead years ago. The second and third generations passed their elements and Avatars to the fourth generation so there power would be enough. After going through a grueling task the met Erati only to find the true core of evil was none other than his mother X-Cross. Darkness started covering the world yet the light still shone. Now the fifth generation plus generations two through four have united to save the world one last time. The United Vessels lead by four divisions. Kelsey Turbine, leader of the 4th Division. Cubia Turbine, leader of the 3rd Division. Twilight Turbine, leader of the 2nd Division. And me, Sleipnir Turbine, leader of the 1st Division. Together we will save the world through our hope, unity, and courage.
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Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: Tailsthehedgehog on August 19, 2010, 07:14:06 PM
Hiya guys - 'Sonic and the Mystery of Chaos' (currently tucked away in the fanfiction section) will be coming to an end in the next few weeks, and I'm yet to decide whether I'll follow it up with it's explosive, pulse-pounding sequel (already about a quarter-written). If you haven't read it yet, get going, if you've been following, there are two more chapters with zero reads on them! Get reading, if I go out with a bang I'll be more inclined to post the sequel!
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: UltraSonic on October 07, 2010, 01:42:19 PM
I haven't done a fanfic since the terror project, and that one kind of sucked.  (And I've lost the files for it).  I've lost the files to some original works as well (Some may have read Demon Speak, regrettably it's lost).  However there are a couple of original works titled "City Of Darkness"  "City Of Darkness 2 Fight The Grave" and the latest "A Cyberpunk Tale (working title)"

All of these can be found on the Crystal Plains message board.  (http://www.crystalplains.net)  A Cyberpunk Tale is the newest, and is the only one likely to be updated for the next 4 months.  It's also the only one for which some concept art has been successfully developed.  (see my deviantART page which is linked to in the Art board).

As far as fan fiction goes though, I've kind of left it behind.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on October 31, 2010, 10:05:46 PM
If you've been hanging in the Oh my god, IT'S SPAM section, you should know I'm restarting my series again because of using all these ideas in all five series when none of them were finished.

There's a prologue that many authors are working with me on making right now. called Sonic: THE MOVIE, its basically a remade version of the Prologue for Elemental Heroes only it explains more things and incorprates most of the history put into my previous saga.

The new series itself is called Legacy of Heroes, which won't be out until Sonic: THE MOVIE ends.
Title: Re: Your Stories!
Post by: SVT number 1 fan on December 28, 2010, 11:17:22 AM
If anyone has seen my latest poll, you should see that I decided to put out Legacy of Heroes early. Only I'm going to put it hiatus once the Movie portion is complete to avoid giving away any spoilers not revealed by questions asked in the Christmas Specials.